Daily Archives: April 15, 2013

Progress Report, in which I compile a laundry list

Finished my read-through of Apocalypse Pictures Presents, and have compiled a laundry list of things to fix.  Have a look: 1.  My main protagonist all wrong, too bland and too whiny.  He has to be much more charismatic and out … Continue reading

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